All are good, but I think the third, with the hands drawing is the strongest ad has a little more narrative interest - the industrial, the worker, and the artist. The diagonal is a good addition as well.
For the third though, the arch of the hammer swing, is too ovoid. I would try it as a full circle, like the geometric work of the constructivists, supremists, Bauhaus, etc.
Could you add any color to the third? Maybe make the hand into a duotone with red and black? And an accent red somewhere else?
All are good, but I think the third, with the hands drawing is the strongest ad has a little more narrative interest - the industrial, the worker, and the artist. The diagonal is a good addition as well.
ReplyDeleteFor the third though, the arch of the hammer swing, is too ovoid. I would try it as a full circle, like the geometric work of the constructivists, supremists, Bauhaus, etc.
Could you add any color to the third? Maybe make the hand into a duotone with red and black? And an accent red somewhere else?