But since I'm going to bed right now... Interesting image and nice handwritten stuff. The type above (Myriad?) is too big and is trying too hard to be clever with changing lines and still has a bad hyphen. Make a handsome text block of it and find a good place for it on the page relative to the girl and the title. A text block has weight and texture and can behave as an element on the page.
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Statement please!
ReplyDeleteBut since I'm going to bed right now... Interesting image and nice handwritten stuff. The type above (Myriad?) is too big and is trying too hard to be clever with changing lines and still has a bad hyphen. Make a handsome text block of it and find a good place for it on the page relative to the girl and the title. A text block has weight and texture and can behave as an element on the page.
Post larger comps. This one is tiny (click on it).
Why is the second cropped?