Wednesday, March 25, 2009
Transit Type
Here's my final. It is a variation of my last iteration (posted), but I also attempted to add the layering elements that were present on an earlier rendition.
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ReplyDeleteLook at it carefully in the blog - at this small scale. The information part of the design - the part of the design that needs the most clarity is overwhelmed by two words, Experimental Typography. You could make the title 10pt and it would tell us just as much. The map portion is what is telling the story, educating the viewer reader. Make that the star.